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During my holidays, I went to Australia. It's a wonderful country, but it made very hot. I had visited Sydney during five days, it's a very touristic town. Next, I went to Camberra in car, where I had discover nice landscapes. I made hide and I had visited a zoo. Finally, I returned in France to my brother's wedding. All the family organized a big party. I saw my cousins and my nephews, who made me very pleasure.
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During my holidays, I have been to Australia. It's a beautiful country, but it was very hot.
I have visited Sydney for 5 days. It's a very touristic city. Then, I have been to Camberra by car, where I have discovered beautiful sceneries. I have done a hiking and I have visited a zoo. Finally, I came back to France for my brother's wedding. All the family has organised a big party. I have seen my cousins and my nephews, and it has made me very happy. Il faut surtout utiliser du present perfect (have/has+p.passé du verbe) pour faire un compte-rendu d'une expérience vécue passée, que l'on raconte dans le moment présent. Pour un récit (nouvelle etc...), on privilégiera le prétérit, qui correspondra alors au passé simple français.
I have visited Sydney for 5 days. It's a very touristic city. Then, I have been to Camberra by car, where I have discovered beautiful sceneries. I have done a hiking and I have visited a zoo. Finally, I came back to France for my brother's wedding. All the family has organised a big party. I have seen my cousins and my nephews, and it has made me very happy. Il faut surtout utiliser du present perfect (have/has+p.passé du verbe) pour faire un compte-rendu d'une expérience vécue passée, que l'on raconte dans le moment présent. Pour un récit (nouvelle etc...), on privilégiera le prétérit, qui correspondra alors au passé simple français.