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it was a good day, i m so happy because to day we made a fire.we had not fire for three day, it was cold .we cook a fish, and we drunk a lemonade, int was verry delicious. it was swing with my friend, and i look the set on sun.    vous pouver me dire si c est bons et corriger les faux merci 

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wazza

it was a good day, I am so happy because today we made a fire. we had not fired for three days, it was cold .we cook a fish, and we drunk a lemonade, it was very delicious. it was swinging with my friend, and I look the set of sun.

 voilà j'ai corrigé ton texte ;)

zaza1771

"we had not " cest plutot "we didn't have "

"it was swing" sa veux rien dire   

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