Bonjour, j'ai un très gros soucis.. J'étais censée faire une biographie + un poster sur Sean Combs, avec deux filles de ma classe. Seulement on ne s'entend pas, je me retrouve seule à le faire. Je suis mauvaise en anglais, pourriez vous me relire, me dire les points à améliorer et me corriger s'il vous plait ? Je dois l'apprendre par coeur, pour demain. 
Vous seriez adorables, merci :3.

SON ENFANCE ET
ADOLESCENCE



Sean
Combs was born the November 4th 1969 in Harlem in
Manhattan. His mother is a African-American, Janice, and his father
called Melvin Combs. Sean Combs mother's was a model, Melvin Combs
was a drug dealer. In 1972, Melvin Combs was assasined when Sean was
3 years old. He played American Football at Mount Saint-Michael
Academy, his team won the championship 1986.

Sean
Combs was a good student, he studied at Howard University in
Washington D.C. He stay in this school one years, received his
diploma in 1987, and he began a intern in Uptown Record, a label.






SA CARRIERE




Sean
Combs became a productor in 1991, made the Bad Boy Record. His
discover many rapper, Faith Evans, Notorious B.I.G. … In 1995 he
created a group with B.I.G., Lil'Cease and Lil'Kim : Junior
M.A.F.I.A is born.

In
1997, BIG die and the productor became a singer, the song No Way Out
is sever time disc of Platinium. He used the nickname Puff Daddy.
Sean Combs became one of biggest productor of the USA, he discover
Boyz II Man, Maryah Carey …
In
1998, he registred for the film Godzilla the song « Come With Me »
and created the trad mark « Sean John ».
In
1999, he release a new album called Forever. Sean Combs girfriend's
was Jennifer Lopez, but she leave the productor. Sean Combs choose a
new nickname, P. Diddy.
In
2003, P. Diddy created a soundtrack for the film Bad Boyz 2 with Will
Smith and Martin Lawrence. Sean Combs changed again his nickname, he
choose Diddy.






SA VIE
ACTUELLE/ACTUALITES



Sean
Combs is now the richest rapper, exeeding Jay-Z , with 650
millions dollars. Diddy is the father of five children; Jessie James,
Da Lila Star, Christian, Justin and Chance. The relationship he had
with Kim Porter just finish.